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there is a thick exhaustion in the pit of my stomach, spreading to my shoulders
till they hang and to my knees until they buckle. and I will sleep for days on end,
and when I wake up I didn't really.

I hate you dear, I hate you so.

because there is so much to do, I could travel to the other side of the country and
paint a portrait of a stranger and I could sit on top of someone's roof and look at the
stars with a boy I don't want to know and I could fall asleep in his bed and listen to
him playing guitar without clothes and he'd take me out for diner and anywhere I'd
want to go and we'd have sex in his car and on the trampoline in my back yard and
we'd eat at my grandparents with Christmas and it would never be enough because
he's everything you weren't.

I think I lost myself, I think I fell out that time you ran away holding onto me and my
skin tore. I looked for her in that empty hole in your chest cavity, but all I found was
lost so long ago, and you wouldn't show me where it went because you didn't know.

and I wasn't ever there.
and you lied the night you left.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! I've used the title of this piece in a poem for of my Found Poetry Project :heart:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Writer
Hello! :wave:

I have used the title of your piece in a poem!

[link]
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michi-iyo Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
really cool concept. awesome.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks :D
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Skie2 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well... This is perfect... Descriptive and tragic... Beautifully tragic... It reminds me of my past
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michi-iyo Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
thank you. also for the watch.
I hope I stirred up things in a good way.
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Skie2 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you did
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student Writer
Wow, this is powerfully biting. Very well done!
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michi-iyo Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
thank you. :3
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crazysingergirl Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh darling.
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